The Big Race!

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is writing good stories. I need to improve on  using full stops correctly. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.

I’ve been in this hot air balloon for 2 days now. I was so excited in my hot air balloon.  
I packed a hot water bottle water, gun, a blanket and a pillow.  

My hot air balloon looks like a black hole.
We raced through countries like America and other places until I saw an eagle.
I looked for my gun and shot it before it popped my air balloon. When the eagle went  
straight down I went down to get the eagle and I put it in the bush and then I went back up.
I raced to the finish line. I am the winner! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! But it was a trick.
So I had a look at the map on the ground there was only five foot prints.
So I went back to my hot air balloon and I went back into the fluffy clouds.  
I saw the finish line it was the real finish line! There was a timer I beat the timer and went home.
Before I did that I left a note saying, I won it's over now, I have all the money now everyone can
go back home. I went back home feeling amazing.