This week I and my class are re editing and publishing our work from the last two weeks. Here is my work enjoy! Its about "What I didn't do in the holidays poem"
Kia ora Te Marama This is an interesting format for a poem, making you think about what you didn't do. I like how you have been thoughtful in writing about paragliding and jumping out of planes. I am happy that you didn't come to school and I wonder if you actually hoped you would be getting a phone?
Kia ora Te Marama
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting format for a poem, making you think about what you didn't do. I like how you have been thoughtful in writing about paragliding and jumping out of planes. I am happy that you didn't come to school and I wonder if you actually hoped you would be getting a phone?